This is a great piece of writing, Bea. I loved the way you walked us round the various exhibition areas. I feel you gave a balanced account of the methods used in exhibits that interested you, along with your personal responses to these and the feelings they evoked. I was very interested in the ideas you had for how the exhibits would inspire your own work. Your organisational skills in writing this piece are very good, and I like the way you use a mixture of short and long sentences to keep the writing lively! Thank you for sharing.
It’s lovely to read about your journey around Kew Gardens and how it has helped to inspire you to join together two of your passions in floristry and artwork. You’ve transformed what you saw on the day into written details, allowing the readers to feel part of your visit. Well done!
Hi Bea, this is such a thoughtful and well-written review! You’ve clearly taken a lot from your visit to Kew Gardens, and I loved how you linked it to your own interests in floristry. Your reflections on the orchid displays and botanical artwork were really insightful, especially your ideas about using different backgrounds and arrangements in your own work. Great job! This will be a brilliant piece for your Arts Award portfolio!
This is a great piece of writing, Bea. I loved the way you walked us round the various exhibition areas. I feel you gave a balanced account of the methods used in exhibits that interested you, along with your personal responses to these and the feelings they evoked. I was very interested in the ideas you had for how the exhibits would inspire your own work. Your organisational skills in writing this piece are very good, and I like the way you use a mixture of short and long sentences to keep the writing lively! Thank you for sharing.
Bea, what a wonderful description of your journey around Kew, I felt I was there with you and felt your love and passion for floristry and artwork.
It’s lovely to read about your journey around Kew Gardens and how it has helped to inspire you to join together two of your passions in floristry and artwork. You’ve transformed what you saw on the day into written details, allowing the readers to feel part of your visit. Well done!
Hi Bea, this is such a thoughtful and well-written review! You’ve clearly taken a lot from your visit to Kew Gardens, and I loved how you linked it to your own interests in floristry. Your reflections on the orchid displays and botanical artwork were really insightful, especially your ideas about using different backgrounds and arrangements in your own work. Great job! This will be a brilliant piece for your Arts Award portfolio!
This is a very informative & well written review. Lots of great detail & great photos